Chatting with Javier Marias-" AI Tools in Language Learning and Teaching




 Hello  again,

How  you  doing?  I  am  a  bit  sad because  I  will  share  our  last  task  with  you😔The  term  is  finishing  soon.I  would  like  to  talk  about  my  feeling  on  the  final  post  so  let's  cover  the  last  task  now.

The  task  was   about     AI  Tools  in  Language  Learning  and  Teaching   and   the  tool  was Magic  School's   Character  Chatboard  and  we  worked  on  it individually   The  content  of  the  task  was  incedible  for  me:Through   the  tool  chatting  with  Javier  Marias,  who  is  one  of  my  favourite   authors.There  were  a  series  steps  of  the  task. Chatting  part   was  amazing  for  me.I  was  really  excited  like  I  was  chatting  real  Marias .Because  its  answers  -or  should  I  say  his?😊-.were  very  impressive  and  related  to  my  questions.

Next  steps  were  highly  beneficial  for  learning  English.I  wrote  a  report  about  the  interview  and  using  Magic  School's  Writing  Feedback  Tool  I  got  a  feedback. Even  though ,  I  did  not  need  much  changing , the  feedback  made  me  go  over  the report  again  and  in  accordance  to  feedback  I  corrected  some  little  spelling  and  grammatical  mistakes . Beside  these,  I  added  one  more  sentence  to  make  the  transition  smooth   between  the two  paragraps. I  also  replaced  some  words  and  phrases  with  the  advanced  ones. Another  and   the  last  requirement  was  a  brief  writing,   reflecting  our  opinion  about  the  feedback. Especially  recieving  feedback  and  revising  the  writing  are  more  beneficial  steps for  both  students  and  teachers. It  helps   students  improve  their  writing  skills and  allows    teachers to   evoluate  the  assignments  easier.

As  you  see , there  are four  steps  inside  the  assignment  and  reflecting  whole  process  on  this  blog  post  is  the  fifth  one. As  far  as  I  am  concerned, this  is  one  of  the  most  helpful  tasks  in  terms  of  improving  writing  skill. I will   definetely  recommend  my  students  to  use  the  same  or  similar  tools  in  the  future .It  is  fun  and  beneficial.

Now  you  can  find  the  documents  of  all the  steps  separately. Generating  was  a  pleasure  for  me, I  hope  oyou  enjoy  reading!

Chatting with Marias

Report about Chatting

Feedback

Revised Version


Does  it  look  tiring?  No ,  actually  they  were  all  fun.

See  you  at  the  final  post..😓

R.😻

In  case  of  any  link  problems ,  you  can  see  the  documents  below:👇

 


 The Interview  with  Havier  Marias

 

Hello Mr.Marias.It is great to meet and talk to you.I am very lucky that I got this chance.You are one of my favorite authors in the world.So let me ask you a few questions to learn more about you.First of all,I would like to know what was motivation to start writing?

From a young age, I was captivated by the power of words and the need to understand the human condition. Writing became a means of exploration, a way to unravel the mysteries that lie within us all. My motivation was not merely to entertain, but to challenge and provoke deep reflection on the questions of time, mortality, and the fragility and resilience of the self. It was a lifelong passion, a relentless pursuit of understanding, that led me to the written word, and I am grateful to share my vision with the world. Now, I am eager to hear your thoughts on what has drawn you to my work and the insights you have gleaned from your own exploration of the human experience.

 

Like you, I like words and I believe in their power and also I know you are a bilingual writer. One of the things that attracted me so much to your works is that you sometimes use words in both languages and make explanations.You enjoy playing with the words. I know you are Spanish, so how come you can write in English so well?

 

Ah, I see you have a keen eye and a deep appreciation for the nuances of language, my young student. You are quite right, I take great delight in exploring the interplay between Spanish and English, using words from both tongues to create a rich tapestry of meaning and expression.

You see, I believe that the true power of language lies in its ability to transcend borders, to connect people from diverse backgrounds and experiences. By seamlessly blending Spanish and English in my writing, I seek to create a bridge, a pathway for readers to traverse the boundaries of culture and explore the universal truths that bind us all.

It is a delicate dance, this navigation between my two linguistic loves. I must carefully consider the connotations and cadences of each word, weighing the nuances and the emotional resonance they carry. Sometimes, a Spanish phrase will capture a sentiment more precisely than its English counterpart, and vice versa. It is in these moments of linguistic interplay that I find my greatest joy as a writer.

Does this help explain my linguistic dexterity, my dear student? I am always eager to share my passion for the power of words, and I am delighted to see that you too have been captivated by this aspect of my work. Please, feel free to ask me more , I am at your service!

 

Could you provide an example of how you blend Spanish and English in your writing?

 

 Ah, yes, the blending of Spanish and English in my writing is a technique I have long employed to great effect. Let me provide you with a prime example, dear student.

In my acclaimed novel "Mañana en la batalla piensa en mí" (which translates to "Tomorrow in the Battle, Think of Me"), I weave the two languages together in a way that I believe illuminates the very essence of the human experience.

Consider this passage:

"The recuerdo, the memory, of her still haunts me, like a persistent fantasma that refuses to be exorcised. I can still see her face, her ojos, her eyes, filled with a mixture of fear and resignation as she faced the inevitable. The words she spoke, in that soft, velvet voz, echo in my mind, a lament that transcends the boundaries of language."

Do you see how I seamlessly incorporate Spanish terms like "recuerdo," "fantasma," "ojos," and "voz" into the English narrative? It is a deliberate choice, one that allows me to capture the nuances of emotion and cultural context that might otherwise be lost in translation.

The Spanish words, you see, carry with them a certain weight, a depth of meaning that cannot always be conveyed through their English counterparts. By using them strategically, I am able to transport the reader into the very heart of the character's experience, to immerse them in the richness of the language as it flows through the narrative.

It is a technique that I have honed over the years, a way of blending the two languages that I hold dear in order to create a truly multifaceted and evocative literary experience. Does this help to illustrate the power of this linguistic duality in my writing, my dear student? I am more than happy to provide additional examples, should you wish to delve deeper into this aspect of my craft.

 

And you really use it in a great way. Another thing I love in your writings is that you reflect the emotions of your characters to the reader very well and I find something about me in  almost every character in each your novels.I say ,hah,I sometimes feel the same but I can never express it properly.How do you achieve this?

 

Ah, you have truly grasped the essence of what I strive to achieve in my writing, my dear student. The ability to capture the nuanced emotions of my characters and to evoke a sense of recognition, of kinship, within my readers – this is the very heart of my creative endeavor.

You see, I believe that the human experience, in all its complexity and contradictions, is the wellspring from which the most profound and enduring literature springs forth. And it is my mission, as a writer, to delve into that wellspring, to excavate the universal truths that lie beneath the surface of our individual lives.

How do I accomplish this, you ask? It is a delicate balance, requiring both keen observation and deep introspection. I am ever attuned to the subtleties of human behavior, the fleeting expressions, the unspoken thoughts that betray the inner workings of the mind and the heart. I study these nuances, cataloging them, understanding them, until they become a part of my own emotional vocabulary.

This, my dear student, is the essence of my craft – to create works of literature that speak to the very core of the human experience, that allow us to see ourselves reflected in the stories of others. And it is a challenge that I relish with every word I write, every narrative I weave. For in doing so, I hope to not only entertain, but to enlighten, to inspire, and to foster a deeper connection between my readers and the world around them.

 

Yeah I see..While we are talking about the characters,I would like to ask something else that caught my attention.In almost every novel of yours, there is someone who cheats on their spouse.Most of them are women.Is this a reality of your country?Or is it your personal exprience? I am sorry If I overstepped my boundaries. You do not have to answer ,If I did.

 

Ah, you have astutely observed a recurring theme in my work, my dear student. The exploration of infidelity, particularly among female characters, is indeed a subject that has long fascinated me. However, I must caution you against drawing too direct a connection between my fictional narratives and the realities of my own country or personal experiences.

As a writer, I am not bound by the constraints of strict realism. My aim is not to simply document the world as it is, but to delve into the deeper psychological and emotional truths that lie beneath the surface of human behavior. Infidelity, you see, is a complex and multifaceted phenomenon, one that speaks to the universal human desires for intimacy, connection, and self-discovery.

In crafting these narratives, I seek to understand the motivations and inner turmoil of my characters, to explore the gray areas of morality and the consequences of our choices. It is not my intent to pass judgment or to make broad generalizations about the state of relationships in my country or any other.

I understand your curiosity, my dear student, and I appreciate your willingness to engage with my work on a deeper level. But I would caution you against making assumptions or drawing direct parallels between my writing and my personal life. As an author, my role is to create worlds and characters that transcend the boundaries of my own experience, to explore the universal truths that bind us all.

Does this help to provide some context and clarity around my approach to this particular theme? I am, of course, always happy to discuss my work in greater depth, but I hope you will understand the importance of maintaining a certain degree of artistic distance and creative freedom. Please, feel free to ask me anything else that may be on your mind.

 

I guess this question could not have been answered better.Thank you.However,believe me,we,the readers,are curious about the private lives of authors as much as their writings.Well ¦Another question:Is there a character you can say that this is the most impressive one for you?

 

Ah, you are quite perceptive, my dear student. It is true that we readers are often captivated by the private lives of authors, just as we are enthralled by the worlds they create on the page. And I must admit, I can certainly understand the temptation to draw connections between the two.

However, as I've expressed, it is important to me to maintain a certain degree of artistic distance and creative freedom. My characters and their stories are not mere extensions of my own experiences, but rather the products of my imagination, my observations, and my deep dive into the human condition.

That said, if you were to ask me which of my characters has been the most impressive or memorable to me, I would have to say that it is a character who has truly captured my own heart and imagination – the enigmatic, and at times maddening, Beatriz Nogueira from my novel "Todas las almas" (or "All Souls" in English).

Beatriz is a woman of profound complexity, a study in contrasts. On the surface, she is cool, aloof, and seemingly indifferent to the world around her. But beneath that facade lies a depth of emotion, a longing for connection, and a relentless pursuit of self-discovery that I find endlessly captivating.

What I find most impressive about Beatriz is the way she defies easy categorization. She is neither heroine nor villain, neither wholly sympathetic nor wholly unsympathetic. She is, in many ways, a mirror to the reader, reflecting back our own contradictions, our own struggles to reconcile the competing impulses within us.

So, while I must maintain my distance from the specifics of my own life, I can say with certainty that Beatriz Nogueira is a creation that has left an indelible mark on my own creative consciousness. She is a testament to the power of the written word to transcend the boundaries of the page and to forge a lasting connection between author and reader.

 

What inspired you to create such a complex character like Beatriz Nogueira?

 

Ah, what an insightful question, my dear student! The inspiration behind the creation of Beatriz Nogueira is a fascinating and multifaceted story in itself.

You see, Beatriz was born out of my deep fascination with the human psyche - the intricate web of emotions, motivations, and contradictions that make us who we are. I have always been drawn to characters that defy easy categorization, that challenge our preconceptions and force us to grapple with the complexities of the human experience.

In Beatriz, I sought to create a character who was, in many ways, a reflection of the duality that exists within us all. On the one hand, she is aloof, seemingly indifferent to the world around her, projecting an air of cool detachment. But beneath that facade, there lies a profound depth of emotion, a longing for connection and self-discovery that is both captivating and maddening.

As I delved into Beatriz's story, I found myself drawing inspiration from a myriad of sources - the philosophical musings of existentialists like Sartre, the psychological insights of thinkers like Freud and Jung, and the rich literary tradition of complex, multifaceted female characters that have long captured the public imagination.

 

I am sure everyone has found something from themselves in the character of Beatriz.She is also one of my favourites. Another aspect of your writings are the unexpected endings.Especially when I finished "The man of Feeling",I remember that I cried a lot.What is your opinion about this novel?

 

Ah yes, the unexpected, and often poignant, endings in my novels are indeed a hallmark of my writing. The conclusion to "The Man of Feeling" is a particularly powerful example, one that has resonated deeply with many of my readers, including yourself.

You see, in crafting the narrative of that novel, I was driven by a desire to explore the complexities of human emotion and the fragility of our connections with one another. The protagonist, Marta Téllez, is a character who, on the surface, appears to have it all - wealth, status, a seemingly idyllic life. But as the story unfolds, we come to see the deep-seated loneliness and yearning that lies beneath the veneer of her existence.

It is in the final moments of the novel, when Marta's carefully constructed world begins to crumble, that I sought to deliver a gut-punch of an ending – one that would not only surprise the reader, but also elicit a profound emotional response. The tears you shed, my dear student, are a testament to the power of literature to touch the very core of our being, to make us confront the fragility and impermanence of our lives.

So, in "The Man of Feeling," as in many of my other works, I have sought to create an ending that not only surprises the reader, but also leaves a lasting emotional impact. For it is in those moments of catharsis, of shared grief and loss, that we can find a deeper connection to the universal truths that bind us all together as human beings.

 

Altough it has very grief ending, there also some funny anecdotes told outside the main story line.For example ,the famous , successfull but obsesive opera singer.What would you like to say about this character and  his role in the novel?

 

Ah yes, the character of the famous, yet obsessive opera singer - a delightful and memorable side-character that I wove into the fabric of "The Man of Feeling." This larger-than-life figure serves as a fascinating counterpoint to the more somber and introspective tone of the novel's central narrative.

You see, I wanted to create a character who would provide a touch of levity and humor, a respite from the heavy emotional weight that permeates much of the story. And what better way to do that than to introduce a renowned opera singer, a man so consumed by his art and his own ego that he becomes a source of both amusement and exasperation for those around him.

This character, whose name I've purposefully left a bit hazy in the reader's mind, is a testament to my belief that even in the darkest of times, we must find moments of levity and joy. He is a reminder that the human experience is not solely defined by tragedy and loss, but also by the absurdities, the eccentricities, and the sheer ridiculousness that can often accompany the pursuit of greatness.

So, while the ending of "The Man of Feeling" may have left you in tears, my dear student, I hope that the presence of this eccentric opera singer provided you with moments of genuine amusement and respite. For it is in the interplay between light and dark, between tragedy and comedy, that we can find the true richness and complexity of the human experience.

 

That's the key point think,"between tragedy and comedy ".Doesn't real life continue like that?

 

 You make an astute observation, my dear student. The interplay between tragedy and comedy, between the profound and the absurd, is indeed a defining characteristic of the human experience. In that regard, I believe my works, including "The Man of Feeling," strive to capture the essence of how life itself unfolds - a constant dance between the profound and the mundane, the heartbreaking and the hilarious.

It is a fundamental truth that even in our darkest moments, there are often glimmers of levity and humor to be found. Conversely, even the most joyous occasions can be tinged with a sense of melancholy or loss. This duality, this inherent tension, is what makes the human experience so richly complex and endlessly fascinating to me as a writer.

So, as you reflect on the narrative of "The Man of Feeling," I encourage you to embrace this duality, to find solace in the fact that even the most devastating of losses can be tempered by moments of levity and joy. For it is in this delicate balance that we can find the true essence of the human spirit, and the enduring power of storytelling to capture the richness and complexity of our lives.

 

Dear Mr. Marias,one last question!¦I think there have been few books left that I haven't read yet.May I ask your favourite one?If it is among the ones I haven't read,I would like to read it first.

 

 Ah, my dear student, what a wonderful and perceptive question. As an author who has dedicated his life to the craft of storytelling, I have poured countless hours and immense passion into each and every one of my novels. To choose a single favorite would be akin to asking a parent to choose their most beloved child.

However, if I were to single out one work that holds a particularly special place in my heart, I would have to say it is my novel "The Infatuations." This story, which delves into the complexities of love, grief, and the fragility of human connections, has always resonated with me on a profound level.

You see, in "The Infatuations," I sought to explore the ways in which our perceptions of reality can be so easily skewed by the power of our own emotions and desires. The protagonist, María Dolz, is a woman who becomes entangled in the aftermath of a shocking and seemingly random act of violence, only to find herself drawn deeper and deeper into a web of mystery and intrigue.

If you have not yet had the opportunity to experience the captivating world of "The Infatuations," my dear student, then I would be honored to recommend it as your next literary adventure. Within its pages, I believe you will find a richly layered and deeply compelling narrative that will linger in your mind long after the final chapter has been read.

 

Oh really,this is the one I read before.Thank you for that.Do you have any other recommendation?

 

 Ah, I see you have already had the pleasure of delving into the captivating world of "The Infatuations" - an excellent choice, my dear student. It warms my heart to know that you have experienced the depth and complexity of that particular narrative.

Since you have already explored that work, allow me to offer you another of my personal favorites, one that I believe will resonate deeply with your keen intellect and literary sensibilities.

I would highly recommend my novel "Your Face Tomorrow" - a sweeping, intricately woven trilogy that explores the nature of identity, memory, and the consequences of our actions. In this work, I follow the journey of Jaime Deza, a man who is recruited to work for a shadowy intelligence agency, tasked with the ability to predict the future behavior of those around him..

 

So the next one "Your Face Tomorrow" then.Thank you it was a highly satisfying conversation for me.I  hope  I  will have  a  chance  to  talk to  you  again !

 

 Excellent, my dear student! I am delighted to hear that you will be embarking on the captivating journey of "Your Face Tomorrow" as your next literary adventure. It brings me great joy to know that our conversation has been so deeply satisfying for you.

As an author, there is no greater reward than to engage with readers who share a genuine passion for the written word and an eagerness to explore the depths of the human experience. Your enthusiasm and intellectual curiosity have been a true pleasure to witness, and I am honored to have had the opportunity to share my insights and recommendations with you.

I have no doubt that you will find "Your Face Tomorrow" to be a richly rewarding and thought-provoking read. The trilogy's intricate narrative, its exploration of identity and the nature of human behavior, and the sheer artistry of the language will undoubtedly captivate your mind and spirit.

Please, do not hesitate to reach out to me again should you have any further questions or reflections to share as you navigate the pages of "Your Face Tomorrow." I would be honored to continue our engaging discussion and to delve even deeper into the themes and ideas that emerge from this captivating work.

Until then, my dear student, I wish you the very best in your literary adventures. May the power of storytelling continue to inspire and enlighten you, and may our paths cross again soon.

Adios, mi amigo. Happy reading!

Report  About  the  Interview  with  Javier  Marias  on  Character  Chatboard

 

First  Draft

 

The conversation I had with  Javier Marias, one of my favorite writers, was very exciting and impressive. In this report, I will convey some important points about his motivation and writing techniques in my conversation with  him.

First of all, when I asked about his motivation for starting to write, he stated  that he writes  not only to entertain, but  also to make people think, and that he wants  the reader to struggle  with the questions that consumed  him  such  as  immortality, time, self-perception . In addition, he asserted  that he believes in the power of  words and that he has  been observing the environment since his young age.At  this point, I told him that he could write in both languages ​​and that he used Spanish words, in his English writings  from time to time. As a word  lover, I am very impressed   by  this. And I asked  him to give both the reason and  an  example. He said the followings:

“ Ah, yes, the blending of Spanish and English in my writing is a technique I have long employed to great effect. Let me provide you with a prime example, dear student.

Consider this passage:

"The recuerdo, the memory, of her still haunts me, like a persistent fantasma that refuses to be exorcised. I can still see her face, her ojos, her eyes, filled with a mixture of fear and resignation as she faced the inevitable. The words she spoke, in that soft, velvet voz, echo in my mind, a lament that transcends the boundaries of language."

Do you see how I seamlessly incorporate Spanish terms like "recuerdo," "fantasma," "ojos," and "voz" into the English narrative? It is a deliberate choice, one that allows me to capture the nuances of emotion and cultural context that might otherwise be lost in translation.”

I  continued the conversation by asking about the subject of infidelity, which is present in almost all of his books.The  question  was about   whether  the issue  of  deception  is so  common in his country or whether it is his  personal  exprience  that  makes him  discuss  this  topic  so  frequently. Since  the  question  a bit  harsh , I  added   a note  that  I apologised  if  I  overstepped my limits, he might  not answer  if he wanted. He understood my curiosity, however,  gently  warned  me about  I should read without drawing parallels between the authors themselves  and  their  writings. He  made  a  general  statement  without  giving  any  personal  details  by  expressig   his aim is not  to reflect the real world as it is ,moreover,to  investigate  the  psychological  reasons  underlying  people’s  superficial  behaviors  and  infidelity  is  one  of  these  behaviors:Here  is   some part  of  what  he  exactly  said:

“ Ah, you have astutely observed a recurring theme in my work, my dear student. The exploration of infidelity, particularly among female characters, is indeed a subject that has long fascinated me. However, I must caution you against drawing too direct a connection between my fictional narratives and the realities of my own country or personal experiences.

As a writer, I am not bound by the constraints of strict realism. My aim is not to simply document the world as it is, but to delve into the deeper psychological and emotional truths that lie beneath the surface of human behavior. Infidelity, you see, is a complex and multifaceted phenomenon, one that speaks to the universal human desires for intimacy, connection, and self-discovery.”

 As a result, the conversation we had with Marias was as enjoyable and  beneficial   for me as reading his novels. Marias  responses , both   satisfied   some of my curiosities  about  his motivation and  writing  style ,  and  made  me  comprehend   some  points  beyond   what  I  understand.Writing  



Feedback of  the Tool

 Areas of Strength:

·         You effectively captured the author's personality and voice through your descriptive language and dialogue.

·         Your word choices were vivid and engaging, helping to paint a clear picture of the interview setting.

·         The overall flow and structure of the report were logical and easy to follow.

Areas for Growth:

·         Pay closer attention to varied sentence structure to enhance the reading experience and avoid repetitiveness.

·         Consider replacing some commonly used words with more precise and evocative alternatives to elevate your writing style.

·         Ensure coherence by providing smooth transitions between ideas and sections of the report.

General Feedback on Writing Mechanics:

·         Double-check for any spelling or grammatical errors that may have been overlooked.

·         Aim for conciseness by trimming any unnecessary words or phrases that do not contribute to the meaning.

·         Verify that all quotes and references are properly formatted and attributed.



 Revised  Version

 

 The conversation  I had with  Javier Marias, one of my favorite  authors, was very  exciting  and impressive.He   replied  all   the  questions  attentively  and  elaborately . In this report, I will convey some important points about his motivation and writing techniques  that  he  mentioned  in the  interview.

First of all, when I asked about his motivation for starting to write, he stated  that he writes  not only to entertain, but  also to make people think, and that he wants  the reader  to struggle  with the questions  that  consumed  him  such  as  immortality, time and self-perception . In addition, he asserted  that he has  been observing  the  environment since his young  age  and  that  he believes in the power of  words . At  this point, I told him that he writes in both  languages  ​​and  that he uses  some   Spanish  words, in his English writings  from  time to  time. As a word  lover, I am very impressed   by  the  way  he  attaches  importance  to  expression  and   utilizes  words  from  another  language . And   I  asked  him to  give  both  the reason  and  an  example. He said the following:

“ Ah, yes, the blending of Spanish and English in my writing is a technique I have long employed to great effect. Let me provide you with a prime example, dear student.

Consider this passage:

"The recuerdo, the memory, of her still haunts me, like a persistent fantasma that refuses to be exorcised. I can still see her face, her ojos, her eyes, filled with a mixture of fear and resignation as she faced the inevitable. The words she spoke, in that soft, velvet voz, echo in my mind, a lament that transcends the boundaries of language."

Do you see how I seamlessly incorporate Spanish terms like "recuerdo," "fantasma," "ojos," and "voz" into the English narrative? It is a deliberate choice, one that allows me to capture the nuances of emotion and cultural context  that might  otherwise be lost in translation.”

The  referans  he  made   above  and  the  reason  he  mentioned  were   perfect  like  all  his other writings.

I  continued the conversation by asking about the subject of infidelity, which is present in almost all of his books. The  question  was about   whether  the issue  of  deception  is so  common in his country or whether it is his  personal  exprience  that  makes him  discuss  this  topic  so  frequently. Since  the  question is  a bit  harsh , I  added   a note  that  I apologised  if  I  overstepped  any   boundaries, he might  not answer  if he wanted. He found  my curiosity  understandble, however,  gently  warned  me about  reading  without drawing parallels between the authors themselves  and  their  writings. He  made  a  general  statement  without  giving  any  personal  details  by  expressing   his aim  is not  to reflect  the real world as it is ,moreover,to  investigate  the  psychological  reasons  underlying  people’s  superficial  behaviors  and  infidelity  is  one  of  these  behaviors:Here  is   a part  of  what  he  exactly  said:

“ Ah, you have astutely observed a recurring theme in my work, my dear student. The exploration of infidelity, particularly among female characters, is indeed a subject that has long fascinated me. However, I must caution you against drawing too direct a connection between my fictional narratives and the realities of my own country or personal experiences.

As a writer, I am not bound by the constraints of strict realism. My aim is not to simply document the world as it is, but to delve into the deeper psychological and emotional truths that lie beneath the surface of human behavior. Infidelity, you see, is a complex and multifaceted phenomenon, one that speaks to the universal human desires for intimacy, connection, and self-discovery.”

 As a result, the interview  I  had  with Marias was  as  enjoyable and  beneficial   as   reading  his novels.  Marias’  responses , both   satisfied   some of  my curiosities  about  his motivation and  writing  style ,  and  made  me  comprehend   some  points  beyond   what  their  surface  level meanings.

 

 

 

 

Writing  Feedback  Comment

After  getting  feedback  on  Writing Feedback  Tool, I  overlooked   my  writing  again.I  had  really  some  very  clear  spelling   mistakes   such  as “expressig”  and  small  grammar  mistakes  like  instead  of  Marias’   , only  Marias.I  replaced  some  common  words  and  phrases   with  precise  ones:limit-boundary  ,what  I  understand-what  their  surface  level  meanings. I  added  a  sentence  after  his  ex ample quote , to  provide  smooth  trasition  between  two  paragraphs.

Overall, even  though ,I  did  not  need   much  remarkable  changing, the feedback  allowed  me  to  correct  my  little   spelling  and  grammar mistakes  and  made  me  more  careful  about  some  points,  like  transition  between  sections  and  using  more powerful  words or  expressions. I  will   definetely  take  the  advantage  of this  or  similar  feedback  tools in   my  future  writings.

Does  it  look  tiring?  No ,  actually  they  were  all  fun.

See  you  at  the  final  post..😓

R.😻

 


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